(by and © Ernesto Priego)
[Note: Ernesto writes: Made with basmati rice on Sydenham Studios' kitchen table. From
eros is arroz:"
a hay(na)ku stanza by John Bloomberg-Rissman, words by Tom Beckett [JBR notenote: JBR emphasis] on Jean Vengua's blog Okir, [2nd JBR notenote: Tom's words relate to Jean's “link poem”, which is definitely worth checking out. Tom adds: "John, a couple years ago I lineated those words into a hay(na)ku exactly as you did."]