Girl singing. Day. [1] THE SECRET LIFE OF AN ANGEL. [2] Like the Doo Dah Man once told me … Aces and eights … [3]
Io insisto e proclamo: [4] Good god I have a shitty memory … LA VITA SEGRETA DI UN ANGELO thrown approx. a dozen times. [5] I'm just making it up now. [6]
AutopoIetic recursion. [7] I normalized the whole thing to get rid of unwanted peaks. [8] For that which can sing notes … [9] a lengthening amen blue capstone shadow / despite my aptitude for blotters creased skipping away. [10]
Deuces Wild, Like An Only Child, [11] “invented non-semantic language text”. [12] Two Hands Angel. [13] Close, there, in color of absence. [14] This is a fallen angel speaking, seduced by the chant of a beautiful girl. [15]
girl singing. day old man. [16] I See an Angel in a Loaf of Bread / He meets his shadow; / shadow of language, / of bread. And in / the loaf, a girl whose / slanted heart is mine, / whose heart is full / of wheat. [17]
I simply stripped out the nouns and put in an acrostic. [18] La / vida secreta / de un angel: [19] Dziewczyna _piewa. Dzie_. [20] _ _____ / ___ _______ ______ ___ ___ ________. [21] yeah, I'm confused about angles and angels ... [22]
The Winter of Shrieking Electric Guitars, [23] Raisined boss / of grey days grasps for everlasting … [24] Like water, the earth’s crust, mental illness, and knowledge, where is the true red, yellow, or blue? Who’s Afraid of Nouns, Verbs, and Adjectives? I don’t know what the sound of a 25-mile ice shelf detaching into the Arctic Ocean after 3,000 years sounds like, but I walk out into the night with that seemingly impossible sound in my head. Even the cracks in the ground cast long sharp shadows. We live through it the way aphids traverse a rose … By itself, the skin takes on consciousness ... [25] It is not only that there is more variation: the text itself changes depending on how closely we are looking at it. [26]
Compliant enough to include everything? What good am I if I’m not a fish? / A loaf of bread? [27] “Actually, it’s a peninsula” … I found your button. / Welcome. [28] And as to laughter, if you allow it in one place (Sixties hagiography) … Like blank paper, I guess …
a skinglyph will take a little longer to fade. I will get to watch over the years as “our old friends the wind and rain” transform my middle aged skin into “all / Ye know on earth, and all ye need to know” - if I’m lucky, which I hope to be. Hello, spider crawling at my feet! [29] Boy grunting, I suggest. Night?
A poem of reversal: [30] eating time and space. Stone Girl madrigal. [31] I unsist and disclaim: I keep my own database of possible nonsense words. [32]
South of the point where its footpath began … the sting that grows on back of the human [33] You are / eligible for their world, not mine. [34]
Bird On Head, [35] The FASTENED ANGEL, and, he, thrashes situation golden … [36] He puts up many / facades, and I allow him: The result of playing telephone with myself at 3 in the morning. [37]
I have taken the first three or four lead lines … Sub-text discovered through use of a fish-eye lens. [38] Here's the whole poem, as source: [39] girl singing on film, girl singing on paper, girl watching girl singing, girl singing after everyone has sung. [40]
Ito ay isang larong pusoy … using the ancient Filipino writing which translates to Babaylan. [41] Girl singing. Day … I will become the clouds / milking the sky. [42]
(by and © Aileen Ibardaloza)
[Note: Aileen writes: “Lifting lines/phrases from the different transformations/translations here, I have created my view of ‘Girl Singing’ in the form of a “word cloud” (a variation of Susan Goldsmith Wooldridge’s poetry exercise where the reader is encouraged to collect words and string them together, thereby creating a ‘wordpool’). [1] Jose Garcia Villa [2] Eileen R. Tabios [3] Geof Huth [4] Rebeka Lembo [5] John Bloomberg-Rissman [6] Lolabola [7] Mark Young [8] Ernesto Priego [9] Sam Bloomberg-Rissman [10] Sheila E. Murphy [11] Robert Rissman [12] Jukka-Pekka Kervinen [13] Bruce Conner [14] John Bloomberg-Rissman [15] Ernesto Priego [16] Rebekah May [17] Jean Vengua [18] Alan Baker [19] Ernesto Priego [20] Franek Wygoda [21] ____ _____ [22] Harry K. Stammer [23] Robert Rissman [24] Claire Rissman-Sherr [25] John Bloomberg-Rissman [26] Ernesto Priego [27] John Bloomberg-Rissman [28] Rupert M. Loydell [29] John Bloomberg-Rissman [30] Ivy Alvarez [31] Ed Baker [32] Giles Goodland [33] Jared Schickling [34] Rupert M. Loydell [35] Ed Baker [36] Mike Cannell [37] Yichen Chiu [38] Steve Mitchell [39] Ernesto Priego [40] Cecilia Sophia Ibardaloza [41] Rolly delos Santos [42] Tim Gaze”]